so heres a new one im working on:
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verse:
st. peter had the passion of a hundred angry men
but me i got no passion and i hate the state i'm in
van gogh he had his starry nights and azure skies that sang
but my nights got no color and my days are only rain
bridge:
so while you see the taj mahal
and while you sail the sea
while you watch the northern lights
and while you forget me
just know
chorus:
i don't think your broke
i don't think your broken
a little worse for wear, but i'll patch you up inside
i don't think your broke
verse 2:
well magellan made his rounds around this world we're standin' on
but you've been building walls so high that no one hears your song
and shakespeare wrote a love song where to lovers finally meet
but here i am just missing you, swimming in defeat.
bridge:
so while you see the taj mahal
and while you sail the sea
while you watch the northern lights
and while you forget me
just know
chorus:
i don't think your broke
i don't think your broken
a little worse for wear, but i'll patch you up inside
i don't think your broke
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it's getting there, im not totally sure im diggin the way the verses
blend with the bridge, and im not totally crazy about the last couple
lines, but we'll see.
other than that, we played our little show last friday at starbucks
and a bunch of really cool people showed up. i think they all clapped
after every damn song which made me feel amazing! i think pana, the
lead guitarist felt he coulda played a bit stonger, and i think donna
wished she knew more songs...but hey kids, good things come to those
who wait. give it some time, i mean, i've been waiting my whole life
just to find people im able to make music with.
oh yeah, and i slept like shit last night. |